Joe: I struggled with the concept of a family vacation and the three-time mention of the word AFFAIR. Punctuation tends to throw me off, too. Thanks for your comments.
Joe: I struggled with the concept of a family vacation and the three-time mention of the word AFFAIR. Punctuation tends to throw me off, too. Thanks for your comments.
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Hee hee - hadn't noticed AFFAIR so many times!Originally Posted by EConnor
Joe: I struggled with the concept of a family vacation and the three-time mention of the word AFFAIR. Punctuation tends to throw me off, too. Thanks for your comments.
Punctuation is tricky. At its best, it is a good guide to what the writer envisions for the read. At worst, it can completely throw off an otherwise natural pacing...
There are a lot of resorts that are marketing themselves for having supervised fun for the kids allowing the parents to be off by themselves.
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Joe, I had the same thought as you. That Tasty Cow spot was so much fun I was planning on posting it even before I saw you had done the same.
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Lee - tasty!
Joe, Lee - loved the cow reads - here is my cut --- Mmmmmm, Kinda creepy-fun script though
dead, ground, charred bovine on a bun, yummy
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T-H-O-M Tasty Cow!
Liked the minimal music/effects. Adds without obscuring your voice.
Wonder who got the spot?
Very entertaining reads on that Tasty Cow spot gentlemen. No critques there, except if the owner fo that establishment has any brains, this is something that will never see the light of day.
Tasty Cow reads a lot like a school project. Sorry, but even the most sun hardened, Macho man doesn't want to be reminded that the product sitting between the bun on their plate had recently been Flossie or Bossie or Bessie. So, do we write commercials designed to get the attention of judges at award shows or commercials that actually might sell something?
perhaps the tag should beThe Tasty Cow, think about it and visit us at GoVegitarean.com
Tasty Cow - Now even more tasty
Okay, I went ahead and re-wrote and recorded my very own Tasty Cow commercial. I've kept 10 seconds open at the end to allow for live announcer tag for the address or today's special, etc.
Enjoy
JS, absolutely hilarious! Poor cow never new what hit her. Who am I kidding, she saw it coming a mile away. Now we just need a visual and run it on the Food Network over and over again.
Joseph
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