Commercial demo. Please crit?

[Patrick]

http://home.telkomsa.net/willcovoice/LaunchV.mp3

From my website.

[VoiceActor]

I like it. it sounds very professionally done. However, I should let you know that I am a realitive new comer to voice work. I'd be interested in knowing how that was produced, signal chain etc...but I do understand if you don't want to share. Nicely done!

[JoeActor]

Nice. You have a light to medium accent that can span a number of markets, and a lot of depth to your tones.

I envy depth ;-),
Joe J Thomas
Joe J. Thomas Acting Portfolio (http://www.JoeActor.com)

[Robert Jadah]

Your accent and elegant pacing put you ahead of the pack at the outset, Patrick, but I think your demo hurts you with the over-production on the first two spots.

It may work very well to knock the neophyte site-seekers off their tricycles, but pro houses want to hear more of you and less of the software.

It's a much stronger reflection of Patrick starting with the K-Jam bit.

Crit'ingly Yours,