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[Colin]

Be honest, even if these downright suck.

[Colin]

Was it that bad? sorry......

[JoeActor]

Hey Colin,

Sorry for the long delay - been swamped lately!

I had a chance to take a brief listen to the NetFlix one.

Pro: pacing's pretty good; nice tonal range.

Con: some words are "muddy"; sounds a bit presentational.

I'd suggest a bit of focus on diction for now. Once that's out of the way, you can work on the "conversational" aspects. Trust me, that's a hard one for a lot of VO's...

BTW, can't remember if you told me, but what's your audio setup? When you're ready, you might want to look into some equipment upgrades too.

Cheers,
Joe J Thomas
Joe J. Thomas Acting Portfolio (http://www.JoeActor.com)