All Purpose-2008

[Colin Campbell]

Not sure I'm crazy about it. Looking for a second opinion. I might scrap the whole thing and start over...

[JoeActor]

Hey Colin,

I'll throw my 2 cents in the ring.

Ya know, I like each of the individual spots, but I'm not crazy about the combination.

I think I want to hear a bit more action / variety.
Maybe take a few of the like-tempo bits out, and replace them with a few off-beat ones.

Just my quick first impression,
Joe J Thomas
Joe J. Thomas Acting Portfolio (http://www.JoeActor.com)

[Colin Campbell]

Hey Colin,

I'll throw my 2 cents in the ring.

Ya know, I like each of the individual spots, but I'm not crazy about the combination.

I think I want to hear a bit more action / variety.
Maybe take a few of the like-tempo bits out, and replace them with a few off-beat ones.

Just my quick first impression,
Joe J Thomas
Joe J. Thomas Acting Portfolio (http://www.JoeActor.com)


That's exactly what I was thinking. I like all the spots but they're too much the same.

Back to the drawing board. I need to be less lazy on my demos.

It's kind of dull isn't it?

I have a few "wacky" ones that I hesitated to put in. That's probably my biggest problem.... I'm always afraid to "let loose."

[Colin Campbell]

Here's the latest revision...

[JoeActor]

Here's the latest revision...
You're getting warmer...

I think the variety is much better, but I don't know about the flow.

You're a bit out of my waters at this point.

Any "demo pro" people wanna chime in on this for Colin?

Joe J Thomas
Joe J. Thomas Acting Portfolio (http://www.JoeActor.com)

[Colin Campbell]

Now, I'm up to version 4...