Commercials demo critique

[JeffreyKafer]

Hey all,

I've got a new commercials demo posted and if any of you have feedback, I'd appreciate it. Thanks!

http://jeffreykafer.com/Jeffrey_Kafer_commercials.mp3

[Jon Morss]

Jeffery -- Not too bad. I would have liked to hear some variety in the reads since it was a bit hard to hear where one spot ended and the other started. Also, try to make the reads a bit more conversational. Talk to me not at me, if you know what I mean.

Nice job.

Jon

[JoeActor]

Hi Jeffery,

If you would be so kind, please post an intro in the Welcome section and let us know a bit about your background and goals. That will help us "fine-tune" our feedback a bit.

Glad you jumped right in!

Welcome aboard,
Joe J Thomas
Joe J. Thomas Acting Portfolio (http://www.JoeActor.com)