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vocal cawd
11-02-2009, 09:04 AM
A clip from one of my audiobook efforts.Thanks for your time and honest opinion. David
Scott Pollak
11-02-2009, 10:54 AM
David,
Quick observations:
- marvelous voice! Wow. What I'd give to have a tone and timbre and gravity that you have here. What a gift!
- Nicely read overall. Sounds VERY much like what we're used to hearing in audiobooks. Nice pacing, good feeling overall. You have the techniques down, no doubt about it. I believe that you're living the story more than just reading it.
- My one niggling complaint: Rushed / lazy enunciation that at times makes words very difficult to understand. Examples:
"... that (barrow? borough?) of superb sunsets..."
"... may chance upon a (quite? quiet) bystreet..."
"... which deals (entye-lee) in second-hand volumes..."
And so on.
But man, I could listen to you read all day!
vocal cawd
11-02-2009, 11:20 AM
Thank you Scott.I recently have been reading the newspapers for the blind and hearing impaired which has required an extreem attention to s-l-o-w articulation.I believe it has been invaluable in improving the very issues you pointed out.David
Mike Sommer
11-02-2009, 11:42 AM
Very nice indeed.
Your acting abilities are prominently displayed here.
As Scott pointed out there can be some head scratching when it comes to a few of
pronunciations -as they are so deeply wrapped in you luscious accent. It might be
best to keep yourself aware of these little pools. Though I love the pronunciations,
most Americans will be hopelessly lost.
Overall this morsel, is very lovely - I want more.
vocal cawd
11-02-2009, 12:43 PM
Thank you kind Sirs. Perhaps I should quit while ahead, but as I love this book, here is a little more of Christopher Morley. The Haunted Bookshop
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