The Commercial Approach

[PierceVoice]

Submitted for your approval *puffing chest* I... can... take it!


Not sure this cuts the mustard. Or the relish for that matter, but I'd really like to know whatchoo think.

So many thanks for the input-- You All Amaze Me!

[Emorgan_Voiceovers]

Dude, I think it's pretty darn good. If I were you I would be proud to send that demo off. The only thing I would offer for improvement: The Harley spot could possibly use a bit more inflection or something. It was good, just a tad bit on the flat side. Rock on bro, good work.